Hey, that's my name! :D
And I'm honored. ;3
I used to be a huge metal head. This is that kind of industrial that's a fusion of metal and electronic :U, rather than the more common sort of "entirely-electronic" kind. This song definitely has a shitload of potential on this site, mhm. :3 I wish I knew more about metal, I guess I could give you a lot more pointers on it. Although, I must note, the buildup was.. Odd.. To me. I don't know if it was a good or bad odd, but it was odd. Then again, this is industrial, right? :P