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The Drums

Are perfectly in-synch.

The melodies are perfect--and that reverb is great. I can't think of anything negative about this song besides that in the beginning it's a bit hard to listen to the guitar because it's all in the left side, but that gets less important as the song progresses. That's just one small thing that's purely opinion, so don't worry about that. This song is perfect :P

Such a great use of Glitch!

Not only is this song amazing as it was without this little remarkable plugin, but.. You used it perfectly. I love this. You are awesome.
MORE I SAY MORE :3

Sexy

Hot damn why am I even reviewing, you and I both know that you know what you're doing so let's leave it at that.
It's fucking perfect :3

Kr1z responds:

Lolz thx x-D

Excellent!

The buildup was kind of a bit too long; I was worried that it would end up being that same thing over and over, but I was in for quite the surprise. This is quite the amazing song and I don't think it got boring at all. It's barely repetitive; the melody is amazing.. I just love it :D

XayberOptix responds:

I'm glad you enjoyed. I will make the next version "not take so long to build up."

The main instrument

The main instrument is just too loud, and too simple. Maybe a bit more realistic of an instrument would make this song perfect. Trust me here, this song would be perfect if you just changed that to something more realstic. Better yet, slowly change it throughout the song, to the more realistic instrument. =P
I liked it.

Krizy responds:

Oh, uhh... Thank you. :3
Like I said in the last two reviews, I know what's bad about this song...
It's because I made this long time ago,
I didn't have a lot of instruments to choose from etc...
The only thing I could do is to update it! but, that would be waste of time
because it won't get through the audio portal and stuff, hehe =P
Glad you liked it tho.

Kay so

Pros:
Amazing for a first song
Great melody
Not all that repetitive
Has a theme
Cons:
Drums sound too quiet
Guitar is too loud, may hurt the ears
@2:15, it sounds too jumbled together but sounds better later on.

Basically, you have a shitload of potential. I want to hear more. Lots more.

Just one problem.

The lyrics.. You have too many and's in there. I know it's a short review--but that's the only thing I can offer. Sorry =P 5/5

giftedbuttwisted responds:

Four?

Fucking awesome

I'm so glad you left that review. This is awesome. I don't know how it could be better. I would love to add in some feedback but I have no idea about the full aspects of the industrial genre. What I can tell you, is the panning is awesome, and everything else just fits right in place.

aloneagainfriend responds:

thanks dude... That #50 for this track... It's not true industrial... just influanced by it..

You Idiots

Apparently this song does have a use. It's already in 3 flashes--even though it's so "useless."
I'd like to see you two make a song this simple yet this beautiful, which, I doubt you even can. Khuskan knows what he's doing, don't even try to judge him.

I love the buildup. I can't see anything wrong with this whatsoever. All I dislike is that it is quiet in some parts.

Sadly repetitive.

I dislike how it gets repetitive in the middle. You need to change up the main melody just a tiny bit in some parts; the beat also gets repetitive after a while.
At around 2:20, I thought it was a bit too late for the piano to stop at that point. That part also gets a bit repetitive, and the fadeout isn't as professional as I thought you would have ended this song. Either way, it's good, it just.. Can be better.

Mozzak responds:

I have a problem when making songs.When I figure one melody out,it bounces in my head a thousand of times so I can't put another melody in the song XD.
It sucks.
Thanks for the review anyway =)

I enjoy composing music and sometimes remixing songs. I really enjoy anything creative as long as there's someone to share it with :3 MSN: Exothehedgehog@hotma il.com (don't ask, it's old, guys =\)

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